My persuasive writing

       

In room 11 we have been doing what we should have in the future a did why buses are a better mode of transport

                                                                                    

I strongly agree that busses are a better mode of transport than cars. I would like to tell you some of the reasons why busses are best.              

Buses are cheaper because you can only pay $2 dollars and  gas costs $150 to fill up a car. For 1 kid it's $1 and 10 cents. 

In addition, you can take your bus ticket and get back on the bus anytime without paying more money  for 2 hours.                               

Buses are better for the environment because they take more people, less traffic driving and making pollution.if lots of people go on the bus there will be less cars on the road.

Buses are faster because of bus lanes. So they don't need to wait in traffic. When you're on the bus to go to town and there is  traffic the bus can go through the bus lane. When you're in a car you're going to be in lots of traffic. That's why buses are faster than cars.  

I hope agree with me that buses are a better mode of transport                                                                                                                 

My Fortnite house

 In room 11 we have been doing a random object made with Google images. I made a house out of  Fortnite images.

My Canva poster.

 In Room 11 we have been doing a poster  of what we did in the holidays on Canva this is my one. Canva  is a web site that lets you create made and real stories. I think my one is a masterpiece.

Soundtrap

We have been making our own soundtracks to copy the sounds of a movie. I chose thie Mr Bean movie. I hope you enjoy it.

Breaking news

 We had to do a breaking news thing.This is my one.

Beach is best

We had to decide why the beach or the forest was the best place to go. I chose the beach.
                         

Persuasive writing plan

 

Eli fakes sick

 We made comics on pixton telling a story.

My beach persuasive slide

 We used Soundtrap to record sound effects for our persuasive slide,

My pepeha

 

my abastact art

 

after reading Luke's way of looking we were asked to create an abstact portraut of owselves.

my oonomatpoeia art

We have been loolcing at ways to add impact to our narratvies.We found that onomatpoeia enhances our stories

 

My Hoolc

 On your mark get set Bang! Number 42 takes the lead he swims really fast some fish surround him but he doesn't care he just keeps going. When he gets to the finish line he gets a free cake and a can of Coca-Cola.  And He wins he wins!

 

Thump thump thump I was walking outside and some  people came up to me.

They said you're not allowed to walk there. 

“Ok sir I will be heading home then,” I said. no you know what’ he said. I’m going to call the cops’ he said. Wait what’ I said. Yeah because you're not supposed to be on this path’ he said. doesn't mean you need to call the cops’ I said. Woo woo woo woo. Went the cop car. “Oh no I have got to hide” I said. I hid in an abandoned car. “They will never find me here,” I said.  “Alright boys find that kid” said the policeman. I heard one open the door when he saw me. I jumped out and ran home. Thump Thump Thump Thump.

Puff puff puff puff I went. “Finally I’m home,” I said. “Mum dad” I yelled. When I went to my mum and dad's room I heard something. “Eli diners ready” my dad said. Ok I will be there in  a second. My life was back to normal. The cops were still after me though. 

blog comments

 In room 11 we have been playing around with this new app called Pixton. We were doing how our blog comments make you feel.

resilience

In room 11 we have been doing resilience thig I did when your  just take a deep breath.

 In room 11 we have  been doing whats  permeable and Impermeable

My Matariki goal

 

My funnel-web spider

 IN room 11 we have been doing insects pictures you can either do it on a computer or a piece of paper I did it on a computer. here is my computer funnel-web spider.

My bumper car writing

 In room 11 we have been writing about this new game called bumper cars. this is my bumper car writing. 

My rain forest picture

In room 11 we have been the different layers of the rain forest here is my picture.        

                                                       

 

                                                                                 

My temperature slideshow

 In room 11 we have been doing a temperature slideshow                              

 

drirections

 

Heat Experiment

 

In room 11 we have been reading about heating water experiment. We are also learning about temperature in maths. We decided to write an experiment to test heating our own water.

How to make a hot chocolate.

 

My quizs

        

Onomatopoeia and similes

In room 11 we have been boing a book create a thing. 

The red ball

 

   One day when i was at home I watched the news. And the news was about a red ball. Thay say that the red ball came from a Factory. I know the location so I went to the red ball. I looked at it and then I knew it was not a ball at all. It was a big balloon. It was made by the balloon company somebody must've left the balloon blowing up. It must have rolled down the hill and got stuck. some people tried to push it but it get unstuck.

My Viking Village story

 I was on a boat and I arrived at a Viking Village. It was beside the ocean and there were grassy hills behind the Village.

There were Old rickety and wobbly  roads made of wooden planks and fences made out of sticks. 

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They had Shields on houses they were made out of iron and stone and wood.

I see animals I saw frogs pigs and birds.And there was fog coming from the water. And I saw people laughing and talking.

 Then I got a weird smell the was the salty green sea.Then a  another weird smell came It was the smell of thick grey smoke from the tall long torches. 

And after that smell there was another smell so many smells came to me. And this one was stinky drying fish it was a very bad smell. 

It looked like people were getting weapons to kill bad guys.

The Village remind me of a video game.

 

                                                         

My pepeha

 In room 11 we have been doing a pepeha  . here is mine   

                                                           

Life Education

 In room 11 we went to life Education.We met Herald the giraffe. We Party to It was really fun. I love the different  colour lights and the stars.

My riroriro anime pictures

Rioriorio 5 facts

 

They are found in New Zealand. 

They are New Zealand’s lightest bird.

They are the best nest builders. The nest is a circle.

They eat bugs.                                                                         

They are small gray brown bird.  

Little Red Riding Hood

 

 

Little red riding hood  has a red coat and a light blue dress. She has a bow in her hair and a red hood on her cape.She has black shoes.

She is brave because she goes to the forest on her own so she's clam. 

She likes pretty flowers.She sometimes listens to her mom 

She is Brave. She is friendly because she talk to everybody. 

She is helpful because she goes to see granny for her mum.

I  think she’s cute and she will make a good friend.

Chance

you have been learning about probability. 
 

Duffy theatre writing

 On Monday Duffy Theatre came to the hall.  There was one boy and two girls.

Then the phone rang  and it was Duffy's teacher. The teacher was muted and the teacher didn't know she was muted. She  wanted him to go on an online book but Duffy didn't like online books so he faked wifi problems.

Duffy wanted more books. The   phone rang again. It was Duffy's mum. His mum said you need to do some jobs to get new ipads. Because Duffy threw  the old iPads  out the window.

 He was walking to calm down then Duffy fell in the hole. He   found bones and found Bess. when he found Bess  he felt safe. Scruffy and Auntie found Duffy in  the hole. They got him out with the tractor. 

My tree man story

 

                                                                             

                                                      

                      

                                                   

swimming

 In room 11 we have been doing swimming  in the school pool. We were using a swimming board to swim with one hand. And we were swimming on our back.

My spray can art

In room 11 we has been doing spray can art. I trade my best I know that didn't finish. But It steel think it looks cool.

My cool face blog

 In room 11 we have been working on are face art.Ms Clifford helped me because when I first started I  did not know what I was  doing .It was really challenging  because the curved tool was really frustrating. I found the eyes were really easy because you just had to make circle.

About Me

 

scootering at school

We are learning to write persuasive arguments.