On your mark get set Bang! Number 42 takes the lead he swims really fast some fish surround him but he doesn't care he just keeps going. When he gets to the finish line he gets a free cake and a can of Coca-Cola. And He wins he wins!
Wednesday, August 11, 2021
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MMM a cold can of coke and a piece of what I hope is chocolate cake.
ReplyDeleteHow about I eat that while you keep swimming Eli?.
If this was you Eli,what challenges wold there be running in flippers?.
hello i like the way you said number 42 was in front of you and when he gets a cake a free coca cola
ReplyDeletenext time you should make the bang bold
how did you do this
Nice work Eli. You have a quality piece of writing with good ideas and great punctuation. Ka pai.
ReplyDeleteGood morning Eli.
ReplyDeleteI hope all is going well for you and your family.
It's a beautiful day out.
Take care and keep safe.
Good morning Eli.
ReplyDeleteI hope you and your family are safe and keeping warm.Take care.
Have a great week Eli.Keep safe and warm.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a message to wish you a happy week Eli.
ReplyDeleteI am looking forward to checking out what you have been working on in your bubble Eli.
ReplyDeleteHave a great weekend.
I hope you had a great first day back at school Eli.I had fun playing ball games at lunch time.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Eli.
ReplyDeleteHave a great week.