My persuasive writing

       

In room 11 we have been doing what we should have in the future a did why buses are a better mode of transport

                                                                                    

I strongly agree that busses are a better mode of transport than cars. I would like to tell you some of the reasons why busses are best.              

Buses are cheaper because you can only pay $2 dollars and  gas costs $150 to fill up a car. For 1 kid it's $1 and 10 cents. 

In addition, you can take your bus ticket and get back on the bus anytime without paying more money  for 2 hours.                               

Buses are better for the environment because they take more people, less traffic driving and making pollution.if lots of people go on the bus there will be less cars on the road.

Buses are faster because of bus lanes. So they don't need to wait in traffic. When you're on the bus to go to town and there is  traffic the bus can go through the bus lane. When you're in a car you're going to be in lots of traffic. That's why buses are faster than cars.  

I hope agree with me that buses are a better mode of transport                                                                                                                 

My Fortnite house

 In room 11 we have been doing a random object made with Google images. I made a house out of  Fortnite images.

My Canva poster.

 In Room 11 we have been doing a poster  of what we did in the holidays on Canva this is my one. Canva  is a web site that lets you create made and real stories. I think my one is a masterpiece.

Soundtrap

We have been making our own soundtracks to copy the sounds of a movie. I chose thie Mr Bean movie. I hope you enjoy it.

Breaking news

 We had to do a breaking news thing.This is my one.

Beach is best

We had to decide why the beach or the forest was the best place to go. I chose the beach.
                         

Persuasive writing plan

 

Eli fakes sick

 We made comics on pixton telling a story.

My beach persuasive slide

 We used Soundtrap to record sound effects for our persuasive slide,

My pepeha

 

my abastact art

 

after reading Luke's way of looking we were asked to create an abstact portraut of owselves.

my oonomatpoeia art

We have been loolcing at ways to add impact to our narratvies.We found that onomatpoeia enhances our stories

 

My Hoolc

 On your mark get set Bang! Number 42 takes the lead he swims really fast some fish surround him but he doesn't care he just keeps going. When he gets to the finish line he gets a free cake and a can of Coca-Cola.  And He wins he wins!

 

Thump thump thump I was walking outside and some  people came up to me.

They said you're not allowed to walk there. 

“Ok sir I will be heading home then,” I said. no you know what’ he said. I’m going to call the cops’ he said. Wait what’ I said. Yeah because you're not supposed to be on this path’ he said. doesn't mean you need to call the cops’ I said. Woo woo woo woo. Went the cop car. “Oh no I have got to hide” I said. I hid in an abandoned car. “They will never find me here,” I said.  “Alright boys find that kid” said the policeman. I heard one open the door when he saw me. I jumped out and ran home. Thump Thump Thump Thump.

Puff puff puff puff I went. “Finally I’m home,” I said. “Mum dad” I yelled. When I went to my mum and dad's room I heard something. “Eli diners ready” my dad said. Ok I will be there in  a second. My life was back to normal. The cops were still after me though. 

blog comments

 In room 11 we have been playing around with this new app called Pixton. We were doing how our blog comments make you feel.

resilience

In room 11 we have been doing resilience thig I did when your  just take a deep breath.

 In room 11 we have  been doing whats  permeable and Impermeable

My Matariki goal

 

My funnel-web spider

 IN room 11 we have been doing insects pictures you can either do it on a computer or a piece of paper I did it on a computer. here is my computer funnel-web spider.