On Monday Duffy Theatre came to the hall. There was one boy and two girls.
Then the phone rang and it was Duffy's teacher. The teacher was muted and the teacher didn't know she was muted. She wanted him to go on an online book but Duffy didn't like online books so he faked wifi problems.
Duffy wanted more books. The phone rang again. It was Duffy's mum. His mum said you need to do some jobs to get new ipads. Because Duffy threw the old iPads out the window.
He was walking to calm down then Duffy fell in the hole. He found bones and found Bess. when he found Bess he felt safe. Scruffy and Auntie found Duffy in the hole. They got him out with the tractor.
Well done Eli for including some great detail about what happened.
ReplyDeleteI forgot about Duffy finding bones.
Can you remember what animal they came from and what they were going to do with them?.
A nice piece of writing. Very well done. You have all the ideas in order and have made it interesting. Ka Pai!
ReplyDeleteHello Eli.
ReplyDeleteI am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.