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Thursday, November 4, 2021

My persuasive writing



       

In room 11 we have been doing what we should have in the future a did why buses are a better mode of transport




                                                                                    

I strongly agree that busses are a better mode of transport than cars. I would like to tell you some of the reasons why busses are best.              


Buses are cheaper because you can only pay $2 dollars and  gas costs $150 to fill up a car. For 1 kid it's $1 and 10 cents. 

In addition, you can take your bus ticket and get back on the bus anytime without paying more money  for 2 hours.                               



Buses are better for the environment because they take more people, less traffic driving and making pollution.if lots of people go on the bus there will be less cars on the road.



Buses are faster because of bus lanes. So they don't need to wait in traffic. When you're on the bus to go to town and there is  traffic the bus can go through the bus lane. When you're in a car you're going to be in lots of traffic. That's why buses are faster than cars.  


I hope agree with me that buses are a better mode of transport                                                                                                                 










12 comments:

  1. I am impressed with your writing, Eli! You have crafted a wonderful piece of persuasive writing and have backed up your reasons with informative information and and facts. Tino pai, Eli!

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  2. WOW Eli,great post.I really like how you explained your reasons.
    GREAT EFFORT :)

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  3. I look forward to your next post Eli.

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  4. Have a great week Eli and I look forward to your next post.

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  5. I look forward to reading your next post Eli.

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  6. I hope you have a wonderful last week of school Eli.Enjoy :)

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  7. Hello Eli.
    I was just checking to see if there was any new post.
    Have a wonderful holiday and I will check your blog soon.

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  8. I just thought I would check to see if there was any new post.
    Have a great week Eli :)

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  9. Good afternoon Eli.
    I just thought I would check to see if you had completed any new SLJ activity.
    I hope your holidays are going well.

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  10. Good afternoon Eli.
    I am just checking to see if there was any new post.
    Have a great holiday :)

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  11. I just thought I would have a look at your blog Eli to see if there was any new pots.
    Have a great week :)

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  12. This will be my last comment before school starts.
    I hope you have had a great holiday Eli.
    See you next week :)

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